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Edward Lewwel glanced at his display screen. He mentally plotted the course of a dozen ships, allocating their remaining warheads at spreads across the specific volume of space. Currently, it was empty. It had been his little talent at the Academy, anticipating the courses of ships in space. Even when his instructors had created a program to randomize a flight path, Lewwel had surprised them at how close he could match it.

But this was no simulation.

The five ships crept along the space lane, following a path that would bring them to the far side of Titan. Each one was armed with a deadly array of weapon systems and crewed by the Mute’s from the Outer Range Mining Colonies. Lewwel smiled. He enjoyed it when these renegade miners raided. It was practical training for his crew.

Lewwel was not concerned he was out numbered. The three ships under his direct command were the best the Addax Federation had to offer. They would not insult Lewwel by giving him low grade ships. Even if they knew the master strategist would find a way to win with them, they viewed such an act as a waste of resources.

A woman entered the bridge. She must be the new second mate, thought Lewwel. Her body was slim and fit, with bright shoulder length hair; she was a very attractive woman. Lewwel wondered if she was sent to frustrate him. She approached him and saluted. ‘Second mate Eve,’ she introduced herself as.

Lewwel nodded to her, paying as little attention as possible. He waited for the tell tale signs of someone uncomfortable in his presence, but she showed none. Lewwel was surprised. His own body had been mangled many decades ago. As a result, he was forced to have his upper body attached to a servitor hover pad. With his legs gone, and a crude mix match of machine and man many people had viewed him in awe and wonder. He knew they looked at him as a freak. But it didn’t matter much to him; indeed, at times he would get pleasure from watching their eyes widen at him when they thought he wasn’t looking.

‘Tell me, Eve, what do you know about space warfare?’ he said. She stayed silent. Obviously she had been warned about his provocative manner.

A flash on a navigation screen; somewhere on the bridge a small warning signal rang out. The enemy had fired a spread of missiles.

‘Deploy ECM and intercept with out own missiles. Target the space between the spread and explode manually.’ The order had come from Eve. He was pleasantly surprised at her forcefulness. The woman had clearly thought Lewwel incompetent.

‘Cancel that order,’ he said. She looked at him, and for the first time since she arrived, Lewwel saw emotion. ‘Sir, it would be advisable to destroy the missiles. If one detonated near us…’

He raised a hand. He didn’t need to say anything. Instead he hoped the demonstration would say all. Everyone on the bridge watched the screen, waiting for impact. Teams of weapon specialists too meek to counter Lewwel’s command, yet too fearful to speak out. The missiles cruised closer, sliding delicately around the edge of Titan. Forty kilometres, and they would detonate at the presence of Lewwel’s fleet. All hands braced for an impact.

The missiles sliced past. Each one flew to the point where it should have detonated, but none did. They simply cruised out, past Titan, through the fleet, and into the blackness beyond.

‘Bait, you see,’ said Lewwel, shattering silence on the bridge. ‘They fire dud missiles, wait for a response from our defences. Then they know we’re here and launch full, weapon grade spreads. We’d be dead in seconds.’ He enjoyed that look of surprise.

They watched the raiding fleet, which now seemed confident no one was hiding in ambush. They turned course slightly starboard, just as Lewwel had predicted. The course had exposed their engines and rears to Lewwel’s earlier spread predictions. The detonations would spark a vicious chain reaction, and if not destroying each of the enemy vessels, would certainly incapacitate them.

‘Helms, you’ll find an updated weapons spread configuration in the system. I want you to implement it immediately.’ Lewwel nodded and watched the young helms controller tap away at his pad. Within seconds, Lewwel’s own ship, Constant, launched several warheads. Following the lead ships example, the other two ships fired similar spreads at the same location. It took mere seconds, a short time in space warfare, before the first detonations showed on screen. A single warhead struck between two of the ships, ripping apart the great engines. Another explosion below one of those same ships tore the belly of it open, and Lewwel could see the ship venting atmosphere. The silent symphony of explosions detonated all around the volume of space where the enemy engines where, ripping apart the structure of the ships and crippling them. The next spread from one of the other friendly ships completely destroyed two of the enemy ships, and the three left had no option but to drift in space.

‘You see, Eve, in order to be on my ship, you must trust my choices.’ The woman looked at him, her green eyes burning into Lewwel. She didn’t act the way he intended.

‘Yes, commander,’ she said, nodding. ‘I apologise.’

Interesting, thought Lewwel. Maybe this one wouldn’t be so bad after all. On the bridge of Constant, they both watched dozens of shuttles depart from the carrier, filled with perhaps sixty expert marines. Soon, the three enemy ships would be in their control. Perfect, thought Lewwel. He had always wanted to see if the Greek’s old tactics still had merit…
©2008-2009 ~AxDude
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Author's Comments

Wow, I just stumbled upon this whilst looking around old .doc files in my writing folder.

Ok, so Edward Lewwel was a creation of my friend; by creation I mean he illustrated this fleet commander that was crippled waist down (great sketch if you ask me). When he asked me to skim through his sketch book I saw this bloke (who had no name or description) and just had to characterise him. We were going to do a bunch of these, perhaps as graphic novels, but the idea kinda cascaded in on itself.

Commander Edward Lewwel is a merited fleet commander in the Addax Federation’s Space Fleet Service. He is decorated and well feared through the Addax’s enemies. Although he is a talented commander, Lewwel’s ‘black sheep’ personality hasn’t made him friends in high places of office, and that is the reason he’s still low ranked commander. He carries an obscured amount of respect from serving officers and power struggles between the Fleet Commanders at home and Lewwel in the field are common.

Humanity has spread through space, colonising hundreds of planets. Even though the different empires are small, relative to the galaxy they are a mere small corner. They have also broken off into separate Empires, as a result of early space faring human nations sending their own colony ships. The three main Empires with massive influence are the Addax Federation, consisting of the majority of humans early nations and being the most influential nation both politically and economically.

The Masami Dynasty, lead by Princess Akemi Masami; this culture has separated from its modernistic traditions and adopted a hybrid tradition of their old dynasties in the early 1600’s and the adaptation into space venture and warfare.

Russka Nation is the largest of the major nations, and consists of the early colonist of old Russia, Czech Republic and many other Eastern European countries. Due to their industrial nature, and sheer manpower, the Russka has the largest standing arms and fleet, but not necessarily the best trained.

The Mute’s you see in this short piece are mutants, humans that have spent their lives on mining asteroids around the various systems. Wherever asteroid belts are found, the empire that controlled it would usually employ miners and leave them too mine and keep up the shipments. When conditions are right, several of these small mining complexes have revolted and attempted to form their own independent colonies. Of course, that means resources needed which leads to attempted raids into the established Empires territory. Of course, the three major territories are not the only ones. Among the stars are hundreds of cultures, all formed due to a certain part of Earth’s culture (past or present) splitting off and forming their own worlds.

I might write something else for this, but I don’t think I’m that good with Sci-Fi stuff. Let me know what you think ^^

And wow, that’s a long ass authors commentary…

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Cool stuff...i think you should continue :] It's got a good back story and good characters, but there's still a lot of room for development. This is definitely more than just a short story.

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"I paid for my indecision with interest,
wandering in the untouched forest
and listening alone to the pine-needles."
-- Yevtushenko [from Zima Junction]
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I'm not too sure; I'm not as familiar with Sci-Fi as I like to think. Besides, if I was going to write this storyline I'd need a lot of length, which would be for a novel. I'm still not confident enough to tackle a novel :S

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'Moral Victory, hu... funny, that's what they said about Jesus when he was on the cross, "Oh, don't worry Mary, it's a Moral Victory..."'
:iconcza24-9:
I really think this has something in it. maybe instead of looking forward to the extension of this story, look back and do some more short stuff, even if it's just rough, to get a clear idea of WHO Lewwel is and where, how, why he got here, and what he's doing. Just do brainstorming, and I think you'll be surprised what comes out of the woodwork. I'm hopeless with writing prose, as you probably know, just because I can't create characters. But you've got someone here. I'd like to know more about Eve too...where has SHE come from? What's the twist that makes her appeal more to Lewwel than previous secon in commands?

--
"I paid for my indecision with interest,
wandering in the untouched forest
and listening alone to the pine-needles."
-- Yevtushenko [from Zima Junction]
:iconcza24-9:
oh, it also struck me as a little orson scott card-esque...have you read any of the ender series?

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"I paid for my indecision with interest,
wandering in the untouched forest
and listening alone to the pine-needles."
-- Yevtushenko [from Zima Junction]
:iconaxdude:
I haven't; never heard of him actually. I'll have to wander out and go see if I can find one of his books.

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'Moral Victory, hu... funny, that's what they said about Jesus when he was on the cross, "Oh, don't worry Mary, it's a Moral Victory..."'

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